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I was a student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I shared my learning.
Thursday, 13 April 2017
Reading: Life in the trenches
WALT:-Desribe how people risk their life
-Understand the importantof animals used in war

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Wednesday, 12 April 2017
Writing: Flashbacks
WALT: Write a flashback from a different perspective and use show not tell
I was crouching in the trenches, bullets making my ears ring, I couldn’t help it. It was like a never ending barrage of booming noises. Who knows what would happen to me at this rate.
I covered my ears to keep the ringing sound from getting worse. It was really hard to stay focused and fight at the same time, but i kept fighting to keep that promise i had kept with that girl. I took a break and then started to do my job again
Reflection: I think i need to make the paragraph make more sense
Reflection: I think i need to make the paragraph make more sense
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Monday, 10 April 2017
Topic : How to say the sign of the cross in german
Link to How to say the sign of the cross in german
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Thursday, 23 March 2017
Reading: Novel Study
To play this game you need 2 players
what you need: 2 counters
How to Play
if you land on a Pick A Card you will have to pick one card to go through the novel - not much
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Monday, 20 March 2017
Writing : True story of Goldilocks and the three bears
True story of Goldilocks and the three bears
Goldilocks, a girl who was maybe adventurous was kicked out of the house for eating everything in the fridge. Now she is in the middle of the woods with nothing.
She was starving, even though she ate everything in the house, Goldilocks was a bit cold until she saw a cottage with a door open She said to herself “who would keep the door open, what are they Animals?, but… i am starving and cold… so i might just into the house..”
When Goldilocks was in the cottage she thought straight away food, she looked at the table to see some porridge, she ate it all, and then goldilocks tripped and broke a chair while hurting herself, next she went upstairs to find 3 beds she examined them to picked the third bed
She slept, so they pain would be gone
Outside the house were 3 bears,2 bears and a cub, they saw the house and went inside, why?
Because we don't know what they are thinking so they went upstairs to see Goldilocks in the bed, They Ate her. The 3 bears walked out the cottage and they also died because of hunters
This is what would happen if Goldilocks and the three bears were a true story, but it isn’t because it’s fictional and will never happen. THE END
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