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Thursday, 13 April 2017

Re: Triduum

WALT: Identify how the Easter Triduum is celebrated in the church

Improve on: I think i can talk more about the Triduum

Reading: Life in the trenches

WALT:-Desribe how people risk their life -Understand the importantof animals used in war

Improve on: I think i can improve on getting more information into my thinglink

Wednesday, 12 April 2017

Writing: Flashbacks

WALT: Write a flashback from a different perspective and use show not tell


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Flashbacks - Sam


I was crouching in the trenches, bullets making my ears ring, I couldn’t help it. It was like a never ending barrage of booming noises. Who knows what would happen to me at this rate.

I covered my ears to keep the ringing sound from getting worse. It was really hard to stay focused and fight at the same time, but i kept fighting to keep that promise i had kept with that girl. I took a break and then started to do  my job again

Reflection: I think i need to make the paragraph make more sense