I was crouching in the trenches, bullets making my ears ring, I couldn’t help it. It was like a never ending barrage of booming noises. Who knows what would happen to me at this rate.
I covered my ears to keep the ringing sound from getting worse. It was really hard to stay focused and fight at the same time, but i kept fighting to keep that promise i had kept with that girl. I took a break and then started to do my job again
Reflection: I think i need to make the paragraph make more sense
Reflection: I think i need to make the paragraph make more sense
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