Writing: Life of a Hedgehog

Life of a Hedgehog

Planning

                                                 Day 1:

I ate some insects, from a hedge, I didn’t do much today but travel through hedges finding delicious insects to eat, it’s almost daytime so I wandered somewhere safe to sleep I woke up since something touched me, it was an insect but I ate it So I went back to sleep.

Day 2:

I woke up to eat some delicious insects from other hedges, then i slept. I’m pretty sure nothing bad happened.

Day 3:

I was so hungry, so I ate my poop because I couldn’t find enough nutritious insects. Nothing unusual has happened so i went back to my safe hideout where i sleep till noon( or night)

Day 4:

I’ve been running through hedges, but i’m barely blind, so i almost got ran over. It’s great that i didn’t see what ran me over, i would be scared to death.

Day 5:

I did my normal routine, I ate insect and more insects the whole night, then i went back to sleep

Day 6:

I woke up to this scent, It’s very good, so I walked my way to the scent, liked it until my mouth was foamy and frothy, then i rubbed it all over my quilts and my stomach(Underside)

Day7:

I have gone through a hedge i’ve never been in. I expect it to have a lot of insect but what i encountered was a hedgehog, it seems the hedgehog hasn’t been in a fight before, so i easily beaten it and claimed this hedge, hedgehogs are lone wolves.

Day 8:

I have encountered a predator, I crawl into a ball shooting my quills at the predator, I am now safe from the predator.

Day 9:

A baby bird has fallen out of its nest, and I go to it but, I take advantage of it and ate the little bird!

Day 10:

My eyes start to open more, i can see a bit clearly now, I ran into a human, I was scared so i went into a ball. Once the human picked me up, i made my saliva accumulate on my spines, my quills have struck the Human, Now the human has diseases.

Day 11:

I’ve found a snake in my hedge so I clashed with the snake, fortunately i won and ate the snake.

7 Years later:

My Life is almost over, i can’t even walk, i’ve stumbled to the ground.

I can feel my body breaking down, my heart beats slow down every seconds.

It’s dark now, i can’t see anything, This is the end of my life…

What i found difficult: Finding more hedgehog facts.
What i could do next time: Add more sentences/paragraphs.