MintBerry Crunch (which isn’t his real name) and his best friends Caramel Thornberry slice and SmoothChoco WhomperBerrySlitem were on their way to the casino, where they had to face a lot of bad people like Beano and Antineutrino, it would’ve been tough without a weapon so they have had a finger gun named armageddon. They Reached their destination and walked right in, greeted by people who wanted a easy win from them... but they lost MintBerry Crunch drinking fruit punch. “You’ve lost to me now pay up!” but those wasn’t the only people who wanted to challenge them, the Barry Brothers were challing them saying, “Roll 2 dices more than 7 and we will give you all our riches!”
“Smashing!, but what happens if we don’t?” says Caramel Thornberry slice“ you give me your souls!”. The friends were blinded by the riches but the Barry Brothers already masterminded the deal.
Caramel Thornberry slice rolled snake eyes! The barry brothers evilly smiled at them, “ SNAKE EYES!, NOW GIVE US YOUR SOULS” Nymphler Frumpplestruutem
Put his hand out, waiting for their souls, the 3 friends begged but they did not succeed because they were blinded by greed, they run for it but I have to admit they actually got away with a building permit, they ran out of the casino, with their money, vowing to never going to the casino ever again...
years later they went back to casino challenging the Barry brothers once more, but in a battle!. the Barry brothers agreed and was determined to get what they earned. The Battle started outside and it went for 3 hours, the Barry brothers couldn't go much longer so they went all out, going into their last phase and last attack. The friends did their special all at once, being their last attack also. "You have to pay the souls we deserved!, we wont walk out of this without them!" says Dangly WhipperSnapper " we didn't just come here to fight you! we want the casino!" says SmoothChoco WhomperBerry Slitem.... The last attack was devastating, all the people had to go inside the casino. the friends had won, they now own the casino, the Barry brothers have nothing now...
years later they went back to casino challenging the Barry brothers once more, but in a battle!. the Barry brothers agreed and was determined to get what they earned. The Battle started outside and it went for 3 hours, the Barry brothers couldn't go much longer so they went all out, going into their last phase and last attack. The friends did their special all at once, being their last attack also. "You have to pay the souls we deserved!, we wont walk out of this without them!" says Dangly WhipperSnapper " we didn't just come here to fight you! we want the casino!" says SmoothChoco WhomperBerry Slitem.... The last attack was devastating, all the people had to go inside the casino. the friends had won, they now own the casino, the Barry brothers have nothing now...
Hey Marcus,
ReplyDeleteThis is Jade C from the Summer Learning Journey 2017-2018. I will be blogging with you this summer! I hope you are having a wonderful time with your friends and your family!
This is an amazing creative writing Marcus! You really have a clear idea of how to use your punctuation marks such as the dialogue marks, commas, brackets, and full stops. I really enjoyed reading this because it was full of interesting ideas and events! You are a very creative thinker! Also I like how you name your character as 'Mintberry Crunch' it made me hungry!
I would love to read and comment on your posts! To help you get started with blogging this summer, I have included the link to our Summer Learning Journey activities list.
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Let's go on the Summer Learning Journey together!
All the best,
Jade C.