Writing: Holiday

This term we wrote about what we did in the holidays

I forgot to post it weeks ago

Term 1 Holiday

The First week was very casual, nothing too exciting happened.

On the first day of the Holiday i was in my house in my room to rest and to play on my laptop

My dad would be watching tv or sleeping in the lounge for the day. On Saturday till Monday I mostly watched youtube videos about games and theories, I was almost in my room the whole time but when i wasn’t I started watching TV shows: The big bang theory and modern family. On Friday 20th, one of my favourite games was released! God of War 4! I started watching a youtubers gameplay of god of war 4, he would upload a 2 hour video everyday which only took him 10 videos to complete.

One of my favourite foreign shows/anime My Hero Academy/Academia released its third season, which was exciting.

Friday 27th 1:30+ AM I was going to Westfield Riccarton, my Mum would tell me we would go by bus which i didn’t want to do so she had her friends drive us there which was a relief.

Once we arrived it was packed as always with people, I planned to eat at a restaurant, Hong Kong Culture was the places name I ate a big bowl of pasta/noodles which I don’t remember the dish’s name but it was quite delicious. My mother told me i was gonna get a haircut, when I was asked my mum  what kind of haircut I will get bet she didn’t know, the person recommended #3 haircut, she said “uh ok”. My Haircut looked nice but I did want it to be less shorter though.

We walked to hoyts riccarton which was not far away from where i got my haircut, we got tickets and a small bucket of popcorn, we had to wait for cinema 3 which was being cleaned,

I took a seat at a small table, I was sat there like a statue, not moving at all until it was time.

We now were in the cinemas waiting until the advertisements ended. I was excited for the moving so i started eating my popcorn just as the movie started. Once it ended my back was burning from how how the seat was, It was like 25 celsius in the there! It was 5:30 AM when we walked it. We now planned to go get myself some now t shirts, which took a long time. We then walked to pak-n-save to get some groceries which was kinda boring, the only thing my mum bought was some meat and fruits I think…  we walked back up to a place where we got some roast pork for my dad and me which took more time.

We walked outside which mum called her friend to go to where we are, I felt tired when i got in the car, he drove us back to our house which was kinda quiet there was nothing to do next but go on my laptop and tell my friend on discord about what I did today. I stayed up till 11 or 12 before I told myself it was time I should really go to sleep.

What I think i did well: describing my holiday
What I could do next time: more similes, hyperbole etc.