we've been working on our ballads for writing the past week,
this is my ballad, it's like a poem.
Ballad
Start, the game had now started
Right of the bat they were being outsmarted
They had to find some other way
For it was a big moment for them today
Many minutes have already passed
It looked like they were having a blast
Time was slipping through their fingers
Knowing of that fact the enemy lingers
They had to protect the objectives
For the enemy had other perspectives
What would be able to oppose the threat
But to spread out armed with their trusty bayonet
They couldn’t think of a way with their limited amount of time
Wouldn’t be able to counter they enemies soon perfect crime
Showing despair yet though they didn’t care
Knowing of a lost that they had to bare
But somehow the enemy team had ran out of time
Just a seconds away before they heard the bells chime
Disappointed by people who wanted to wait
They should’ve gone earlier, too little to late
Now They’ve won, they had acquired victory
This would’ve gone down in gaming history
what I've enjoyed: writing this ballad and spending most of my time at home making it
what I found difficult:
Hi Marcus, I really like your ballad that you have written about games. I like how you decided to use video games as your ballad inspiration. I also like all the interesting vocabulary that you used in your ballad. Maybe next time you could make it a bit shorter and re-read your ballad,but other then that it was amazing.
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